Through the front window
the breeze brought me your perfume.
Lilacs are blooming
Lilacs (Photo credit: Julianna)
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Thanks for the links and the mention. That was my first(last) attempt at Hiaku. Thanks again..
You are welcome! I enjoyed your Haiku – and excellent first Haiku and I do hope it is not your last. I find I think in Haiku so maybe the form comes easier to me. To me a haiku is a word snapshot of a moment or a feeling.
I find I think in haiku too! It is almost like flash fiction in that there is sometimes a whole story behind the 17syllables. For example I am struggling to come to terms with my mum’s death in October and the aftermath – clearing out her home and belongings which she loved so much. They are of little value to anyone else of course. Every stage suggests a haiku to me:~
A Life in storage,
Works of art, labours of love
Relics of a past
Thanks for the insight and the encouragement..Perhaps I will venture again into the world of Haiku
Beautiful, I can almost smell the lilac. Thanks for the posting.
Thank you for reading – I love the smell of lilacs…makes it clear to me that summer is waiting around the corner…
beautiful !
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