Free Fall


Free fall

(Photo credit: Nney)

Inside myself
finding cliff edge
feeling sharp break
between known and unknown

It is safe over here
why would I go there?

her smile pulls me
dammit
why is this so hard?

I step into destiny
plunge downward
hurtling
fast
as
g
r
a
v
i
t
y

free falling
kinda like flying
except for
the landing

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13 responses to “Free Fall

  1. Sometimes the landing is soft, if you land at all.

  2. I’ve known this feeling too.

  3. haaa @ M. Weebles… I love the design of this piece. Excellent and very clever as usual. Now jump ..maybe you’ll sprout some wings
    and thank you for planting that damn Tom Petty song in my head..grrr

  4. I love visual poetry. Excellent idea to present “gravity” like this.

    I like your opening:
    “Inside myself
    finding cliff edge”

    And closing:
    “except for
    the landing”

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