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Haiku: Ruby (HH Prompt)


Ruby

vivid bittersweet
autumn blushed lips tinged with heat
your memory burns.

 

Inspired by the theme word “RUBY” at
Haiku Horizons
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14 responses

  1. Very very good. Visual and sensory.

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    1. In the silence of my empty house I write words for my imaginary lover hoping my longing will make her real. This is actually a form of insanity. And it makes for adequately readable poetry!

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  2. Arouses deep emotions,

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    1. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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  3. May have been years since you’ve dated but seems to me you are being a bit selfish not sharing your poetic self in “person”!!!

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    1. Lol. Some things are simply better in theory than they prove to be in reality.

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  4. You have a natural way with romance. Nicely done..

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    1. At least on “paper” I do – been years since I had a date! You are very kind to say so – I guess it is like the old saying about teaching and doing. In this case romance and poetry. Which would be “those that can do; and those that can’t write poetry!”

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      1. You made me laugh with this one:

        In the case of romance and poetry “those that can do; and those that can’t write poetry!”

        And I write a LOT of poetry myself.

        You have an obviously a romantic soul inside you and also a humorous personality.

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  5. Nice! It ties in well with the previous prompt, too.

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