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Haiku: Circle (HH Prompt)


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Haiku 1:
once around the sun
we mark from darkness to light
find ourselves older

Haiku 2
geometry is
limited she said breaking
into my circle.

Inspired by the theme word “CIRCLE” at
Haiku Horizons
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8 responses

  1. Oh, very nice — the second one makes you stop and think — very well done!!!!

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    1. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I must say I like the the multiple meanings of circle. Layered words like circle also show why it is so difficult to translate meaning between languages.

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      1. Very welcome 🙂

        Makes you understand how one translation can be bogus, and another can be a masterpiece. Getting a sense of the layers is the trick …

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  2. I like them both by I liked the second better. The interpersonal nature captured my attention. You write of such things so well.

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    1. Thank you so much – you can come by and leave comments any time! This is a fine start to my morning 🙂

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      1. Glad to be a part of your morning. 🙂

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  3. Nicely done, Merlin. 🙂

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    1. Kind of you to say! Thanks so much for visiting and commenting. It is muchly appreciated
      Happy New Year 🙂

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