Poem: Vision

she wore a dress
exquisite as she
she wore a dress
such loveliness

the loveliest dress
that you might see
a wonderful dress
that made me stare
and forget to breathe

yet nothing compares
not even that dress
to the way that she
shaped that dress
filled that dress
moved that dress

nothing that she wears
will ever compare
to the she that she is
and the way that she is
and the way that I feel
when she is so near
dress or no dress
dressed or undressed
I am obsessed
with the she that is she
and the wonder of her
stirring the wonder in me…

she wore a dress
a simple white dress
exquisite as she.


3 responses

  1. Forgot to breathe…that’s says it all- the feeling I the whole wonderful piece. Well done, sir.

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    1. You are too kind. Was part of a dream and wrote it quickly while having a coffee and trying to rush out the door. Needed to write it down before I forgot the imprint. Needs some tighter words – but kinda alright for a quick write 🙂


      1. Kinda alright indeed. I’m truthful and yes, kind.


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