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Poem: Incoherent Lovers


stammering
we stumble over words
split infinitives without meaning to

you disconnect my thoughts
from my vocalizations
so that every sentence
is more meaningless
than the last jumble
of incoherence

weakly jittery
neatly quivery
meekly shivery
faulty delivery

looping biofeedback
cascading overload
blue screen
abort

unable to express desire
we awkwardly disconnect
walk quickly apart
relieved to flee
regretfully
replaying
a moment
missed
and forever lost.

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3 responses

  1. Very nice. It brings back thoughts and feelings from my own experiences. I love the fun connection of the words in:

    weakly jittery
    neatly quivery
    meekly shivery
    faulty delivery

    Like

  2. Well done. It describes those situations well bringing back one of my own experiences. I love the fun connection of words:
    weakly jittery
    neatly quivery
    meekly shivery
    faulty delivery

    Like

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